This is what you need :)
Greeting!
first you need to add a greeting to your email (for example)
Hi (name), hi there, hello, of sincerely, sincerely is more of a formal greeting. Don’t write sup or yo.
Content!
Secondly add a content. In a content don’t write all capital letters.
Also the worst thing you possibly do is slang don't write like I want 2b or
I c a table or something and add a subject. If you want you can use paragraphs.
Ending!
Lastly you need to make a very polite ending (for example)
Thanks a lot. You can also write sincerely then your name.
If you written a email to your parents you can write lots of love.
Have you ever done a Email you someone?
Hi Julian
ReplyDeleteI like the font that you have used. Good to see you experimenting with different styles.
Great, you have added many good points around how to write a formal email. I am very glad to see that you mentioned not to use slang or text language.
Perhaps you could add a visual next time to make your work more visually appealing?
Thanks,
Mrs Carney
Hi Julian,
ReplyDeleteI liked that you explained all of the rule of emailing! You said a lot of stuff about the topic, and yes I have sent a email.
-Zac
Kia ora Julian,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have given us options for what to write and used brackets for extra information that we may need to know.
Last year and the year before that, in class, we had to write an email to our whanau each week explaining what we had done. Do you have to do this?
Next time you could colour code some parts so it is even easier to see.
Have an awesome day.
Zara @ Belfast School.