Writing

Hello today this week we learned how to write a narrative.
The one highlighted in yellow is what I did.

Using your new knowledge of noun groups (adjectives & nouns), text connectives

(pronouns & time connectives) & interesting verbs & adverbs, fix up the following

sentences. 

Remember: 

Adjective - describing word i.e. beautiful

Noun - naming word i.e. cat

Pronoun - replaces a noun in a sentence i.e. he, she, I

Time connective - joins sentences & phrases together i.e. firstly, meanwhile, next

Verb - doing word i.e. running, biking

Adverb - word that modifies a verb i.e. she swam quickly 

You may find it useful to use a thesaurus to find new words.  

Using your new knowledge of these written features, transform 3 of these sentences. 

The pup lay on the snow. She looked at the water. It was a sunny day. It was cold.

The fluffy chubby white pup relaxes nicely on the shivering snow. She gazed and the

sparkling clear water. It was a beautiful bright sunny day. It was shivering cold like 10,000 ice

cubes covering your whole body.

The vehicle went across the road. There was a car waiting to cross.

Bright pink giant truck ZOOMED past the ruff bumpy road. There was a wide thick vehicle

waiting for it's time to cross.

The crow flew across the sky. It had wings and a beak.

The fluffy black dark Crow sword as quick as a jet plane. It had gigantic wings & a sharp pointy beak.

The bird flew across the sky. It had big wings and yellow eyes. It saw something, and went down

towards the ground.

The bird dived through the bright blue sky. It had enormous wings and a devil looking dark

yellow eyes. It quietly stared at something, and dived down towards the flat ground.

A tentacle came out of the water. The creature had a big head and big eyes.

The Tentacle bursted out of the cold shivering water. The strange-looking creature had

a ginormous head and thick eyes.

Create Task: Use the one of the following pobble prompts, to write a short paragraph ( 7-8 sentences) using your new understanding of written narrative features. 

Start writing below

  

Jim the chubby seal!

One bright gloomy day, There was a seal as chubby as me. The seal named himself Jim. He loved licking slithery slimy fish. The seal lived in a cold shivery place, On the white icy snow. He had one mortal enemy. The dark killer whale. He has not seen him in 3 months. He was having a great time without her but then suddenly He came. You're probably wondering who was the person who came. It was the dark killer whale. It’s black as a solar eclipse. She wanted to call for help so she got the telephone and called the penguins. They came in a jif and peaked them with their pointy beaks. The dark killer whale. Ran away as fast as she could.

fun fact: seals can stay underwater for 30 minutes.

thank you for reading bye